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英语优秀范文赏析

英语优秀范文赏析


一、假如明天就是你的生日了,你打算邀请你的好朋友John 吃饭,请你写一篇对话稿。

Eric: My birthday dinner is next day. Let’s think about the food.

John: Sure, how about sushi, beefsteak and vegetables?

Eric: Sounds good. I like them.

John: But I don’t like sushi.

Eric: It’s my birthday. I like sushi.

John: You’re right. What about fruit?

Eric: What about watermelons and apples?

John: OK, let’s have strawberries and apples then.

教师评语(Teacher comments):

Happy birthday to you! Would you like to have dinner with me tomorrow? I also like sushi. Haha... One suggestion for you: take some care of your friend John’s feelings and order something he

作者:初一(53)班刘峻语

指导教师:付肖艳

二、假如你是王杰,上周末你和你的父母去乡下旅行了。请你根据以下提示,给你的美国必有Joe发一封电子邮件,向他介绍一下你的这次乡下之旅。

提示:How did you go to the countryside?

What do you think of the life there?

要求:词数不少于60,可适当发挥。电子邮件的格式已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Joe

Last weekend, I went to the countryside with my parents. We went there by car. When we got there, we were very relaxed. The air was very fresh and we could hear birds singing in the trees. We did lots of things there. We visited a farm and climbed the mountainswith my family. And we took lots of beautiful photos. We also tasted some delicious food there. And I fed duck in the farm. I think the life there is relaxing. I must visit there again.

Yours,

Wang Jie

教师评语(Teacher comments)

Perfect! I appreciate your handwriting. But you should pay more attention to the verbs and tense. I like you very much,but I think you can be more positive in English classes. Come on!

作者:初二(4)班万力萍

指导教师:樊昀孟

三、写一篇小短文介绍你的饮食习惯。

My Eating Habits

My name is Amaris. I like healthy food. For breakfast, I like drinking some milk and eating bread. I think they are very good. For lunch, I like eating chicken and ice-cream. For dinner, I like eating fruit and vegetables. They’re healthy. But I don’t like eating hamburgers. Because I don’t want to be fat.

教师评语(Teacher comments):

I can see you have a balanced diet. Good eating habits will be of help for building a beautiful figure and keeping a healthy mind. Keep your good eating habit well.

作者:初一(53)班詹楠

指导教师:付肖艳

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